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Risks of damages to property, life and health have accompanied the people for a long time. Nevertheless the technical progress and advancement reached nowadays people did not succeed in eliminating these risks neither predicting them reliably.

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Let me announce that CMC Graduate School of Business in Celakovice is opening the 18th run of the certified educational program the Dynamic Manager on 30th September 2003. This well proved and continually innovated program is accredited by the Ministry of Education of the Czech Republic and is sought mainly by international and domestic firms interested in a high educational standard of their managers. Participating entrepreneurs and managers always evaulate a specific climate of our manager classes with possibility to gain new inspiration and strenghten competitive advantages.

You can find more information about the Dynamic Manager in the enclosed brochure. We would like to emphasize that the Dynamic Manager is a unique educational program inspired by the structure of foreign programs MBA. The program combines development of strategic thinking in global and European context with realistic insite into firm operations and modern human resources management. You will find here a strong emphasize on marketing management and economic connections of general management and entrepreneurship. Alumni of this program traditionally appreciate the interactive character of our education, using case studies, learning new firm approaches and illuminative training of essential mangerial skills. The Dynamic Manager as a complex program notably strengthens ability of managers to make decisions and to cooperate in teams.

This whole program consists of thirteen to fourteen modules and its graduation include working out and defending a project aimed on problems of company practice.

The persons concerned can also study individual modules according to their needs and their studying schedule can be adjusted inividually.

If you are interested in this program or/and our school, we will be pleased to provide you with more information.

Best regards

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About CMC Graduate School of Business

CMC Graduate School of Business established in 1991 is one of the leading regional business schools, with partnerships and extensive network with a number of world’s top universities. CMC focuses on providing quality management training for local and multinational corporations and has been offering both degree and non-degree business programs for more than a decade.

CMC’s flagship programs include top-quality MBA programs offered in partnership with world-leading business schools. They are designed both for young professionals and managers, as well for senior executives. For starting and middle managers CMC offers the Weekend MBA in partnership with DePaul University, Chicago. For top executives in senior management positions or with senior management potential from the Czech Republic and the wider region of Central and Eastern Europe CMC launched a new Executive MBA in International Management with Thunderbird, The American Graduate School of International Management scheduled to start at the end of October 2003. It is the highest-ranked program of its kind in the region. Thunderbird is consistently ranked among the top schools in the areas of international business and executive education by The Wall Street Journal, US News & World Report, Financial Times and Business Week.

CMC also hosts executive education programs with the William Davidson Institute at the University of Michigan Business School and an array of specialized management seminars and business programs. Business English courses. CMC has recently established a new initiative focused on Governance and Leadership.

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Sample of companies in which the graduating students work:

The graduates come from a number of Czech and international companies including ČSOB, Air Products and Chemicals, McDonald’s, American Express, Český telecom, Bristol-Myers Squibb, Eli Lilly, Česká pojišťovna, Česká spořitelna, Siemens Building Technologies, Telenor Networks, ON Semiconductor, Commerzbank, Salomon Smith Barney-Citigroup, WaferNet, Germany, Johnson & Johnson, BNP Paribas, Weinhold Legal, Čechofracht, Trane and others.

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Risks of damage to property, life, and health have been with people for a long time. Even with technological progress and other advancements enjoyed nowadays, people have not succeeded in eliminating risk, or predicting it reliably.

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People have lived with risk to life, limb, and property forever. Even with the technological and other advancements that we enjoy today, we have not eliminated risk, or been able to predict it reliably.

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Prospective Dynamic Manager:

CMC Graduate School of Business in Celakovice begins its eighteenth certified educational program, Dynamic Manager, on 30 September 2003. This innovative and proven program is accredited by the Ministry of Education of the Czech Republic and is sought after by international and domestic firms interested in high educational standards for their managers. Participating entrepreneurs and managers always praise our management classes for gaining new inspiration and strengthening competitive advantage.

You can find more information about the Dynamic Manager program in the enclosed brochure. We would like to emphasize that the Dynamic Manager program is unique, inspired by the structure of foreign MBA programs. The program combines developing strategic thinking in a global and European context with realistic insights into business operations and modern human resources management. You will find here a strong emphasis on marketing management and the economic relations between general management and entrepreneurship. Alumni of this program traditionally appreciate the interactive character of our teaching as well as using case studies, learning new business approaches, and participating in revealing training activities for essential managerial skills. The Dynamic Manager, as a complex program, notably strengthens the ability of managers to make decisions and to cooperate in
teams.

The program consists of thirteen to fourteen modules, and graduating from it includes developing and defending a project aimed at solving practical company problems. Participants can also study individual modules according to their needs, and the schedule for their course of studies can be adjusted individually.

If you are interested in this program and/or our school, we will be pleased to provide you with more information.

Best regards,

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Press information

CMC Graduate School of Business

The CMC Graduate School of Business was established in 1991 and is one of the leading regional business schools, with partnerships and an extensive network including a number of the world’s top universities. CMC focuses on providing quality management training for local and multinational corporations and has been offering both degree and non-degree business programs for more than a decade.

CMC’s flagship programs include top-quality MBA programs offered in partnership with some of the world's leading business schools. They are designed both for young professionals and managers, as well for senior executives. For beginning and middle managers, CMC offers the Weekend MBA in partnership with DePaul University, Chicago. For top executives in senior management positions, or with senior management potential--from the Czech Republic and the wider region of Central and Eastern Europe--CMC has recently launched a new Executive MBA in International Management with Thunderbird, The American Graduate School of International Management. This program is scheduled to start at the end of October 2003. It is the highest-ranked program of its kind in this region. Thunderbird is consistently ranked among the top schools in the areas of international business and executive education by The Wall Street Journal, US News & World Report, the Financial Times and Business Week.

CMC also hosts executive education programs for the William Davidson Institute at the University of Michigan Business School, with an array of specialized management seminars and business programs. CMC has recently established a new initiative focused on Governance and Leadership.

Sample companies of CMC graduates

The graduates come from a number of Czech and international companies including ČSOB, Air Products and Chemicals, McDonald’s, American Express, Český telecom, Bristol-Myers Squibb, Eli Lilly, Česká pojišťovna, Česká spořitelna, Siemens Building Technologies, Telenor Networks, ON Semiconductor, Commerzbank, Salomon Smith Barney-Citigroup, WaferNet, Germany, Johnson & Johnson, BNP Paribas, Weinhold Legal, Čechofracht, Trane, and others.

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